ARoadofLoveandMemory，ARoadofLo

　　ARoadofLoveandMemory
　　Itsjustanordinaryroad，nearlythesameaseveryotheroneinthecampus，ifnotnarrowerorshorter。
　　Linedwithtallparasoltreesatbothsides，thepathisneatandquiet。OnoneendofitstandstheMathsBuilding，whichisalreadytimeworn，butstillingoodshapeandeyecatchingbecauseofitsdelicatedesign。Thebuildingdatesbackto1960s，whichaddstoanatmosphereofartandculture。Thehouseontheotherendismuchmoremodern。IthasanEuropeanstyle，withsmallerstructuresandbrightercolorsofwalls，whichgivesyouafeelingofvigorandyouth。Thetwobuildings，andthepath，andthelawnsurroundingthepath，existinharmony，andformabeautifulpicture。
　　Butinfact，itsnotthenaturalbeautyoftheroadthatattractsmesomuch。Itstheromanticstoryofitthatcatchesmyfancy。Itissaidthatseveralyearsago，aromanticfilmwasshothererightontheroad。Itgoeslikethis，aboyandagirlarewalkingsweetlyontheroadonenight。Theboygivesthegirlabottleofperfumeasapresenttoshowhisloveandcareforher。Andthatsjustthegirlsfavorite。Thegirlthankstheboyshylyandsweetlywithbrightcolorsonherface。Sotheboyisintoxicatedandencourageshisprettygirltotrytheperfumerightnow。Thegirlgiveshimasweetsmile，lookingintohiseyeswithdeepaffection。Dear，Iknowthemostbeautifulwaytosprinkletheperfume，saysthegirl，socloseyoureyes，andIwillshowyouthemagic。Theboyfollows，andcloseshiseyes，smilinginsweetexpectation。Thegirlraisestheperfumehighintheairashighasshecanmake。Thenshesprinklesgentlyseveraldropsoftheperfume。Theboysmellsthescentandopenshiseyes。Heseeshisprincessdancingsogracefullyinacirclewiththeperfumehighinherhands。Shesprinklestheperfumeasshedances。Tinydropsofperfumealsodancesinthecoolnightair。Scentofitspreads，andflows，surroundingandembracingthedancinggirl，wholookssobeautifuljustasifshewereaprettyandgloriousangeldancingfromtheparadiseabove！Theboystaresathislittlebeautyinexcitementanddoesntknowwhattodo。Thenhishandsareheldgentlybythegirl。AndheisledintothePerfumeRain。Whataperfectmagic。Twoloverswalkhandinhand，immersedintheairofperfume。Anddropsofthescentfallandlieontheirhair，theirshoulders，clothes，andhearts。Theirloveispurifiedanddeepenedinthemagicperfumerain。Thustheroadgetsanothernameperfumepath，alsoanameofmagicthatalwaysbringsusimaginationofloveandromance。
　　Thatshowtheroadgainsitsspecialbeauty。AndthatswhyIcallitaroadoflove。Butnotlongago，itplayedcompletelydifferentroleintheuniversitylife。Thenitbecamearoadofmemory，atleasttome。
　　ThatwastheseconddayofthedeathofourfamousheadmasterSu，Buqing。WhenIwentrunningonemorningtotheXiangHuiHall，Iwashitbyaspecialscene。Hundredsofpapercranesarehangingonthetreesalongthesidesoftheroad，whiteandyellow，alldelicatelyhandmade，flutteringinthewind。Amongthemtherewerealsosmallnoteswithwordsthatexpressedourloveandrespectfortheheadmaster。Iwasdeeplymoved。Inmyeyes，theroadhadneverbeenasbeautifulasitwasthatverymorning。Andmyaffectionforithassincedeepenedalot。
　　Ilovewalkingalongtheroad，asitsreallynicetohavearoadofloveandmemoryinthecampus。
　　简评
　　校园生活永远多姿多彩、浪漫绮丽，因为它是所有学子年少青春的见证，也是所有人内心深处的一片温馨。俞沛贞同学以其细腻的笔触婉婉描述了一个浪漫名称的由来，描述了年轻学子的浪漫奇想与真挚。
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　　（点评教师：张雪波）
　　ARoadofLoveandMemory