Therewasoncealittleboy，spalace。Hewasajollyfellowinhislife。 Oneday，hewentdowntothebrooktopicksomeflowers。Closetothebrookwasalittlelog，onitwasatinker。Besidehimwasatoolbox，andinitweresometools。Hemustbetheonethatfixedtheplumingmachineinthebackyardofmyhouse！mygrandpagaspedashesaidthat。Thetinkerwaseatinghislunch：Oneortwopiecesofbread，abitofcoldmeat，andacoldpotato。Ithatgrandparanintothehouse，andgrabbedtwofreshapples，andgaveittothetinker。Thetinkerthankedgrandpaandatetheapples。Andthenhewentdowntothebrooktohaveadrink。Whenhecameback，hesaid，Nowmyboy，weshallplantatree！Atree？askedgrandpa，ButIthoughtonlygodmakestrees！True，saidthetinker，Onlygodmakestrees。Butsometimeswecouldhelphim。Andthetinkerpulledoutastick，anddugaholeinit。Inwhichhefoundabark。Hetookthebarkoutofthestick，andgavethesticktograndpa，saying，Hwashitinthebrook。Andsograndpawenttothebrook，andwashedupthestick。Andthenwentbackofwhichthetinkerwasstandingwiththebarkinhishands。 Therehefoundthetinker，draggingsomegrassfromtheground。Ashand，andusedthegrasstotieuparoundwiththebark。Thenheslippedthebarkbackinthestick。Andthenhetookitout，squeezedthewaterout，andtoldgrandpatowashitupagain。Whenhecameback，heputthebarkbackinitagain。Andthenfitteditintoahole，thaveahole，afewmonthspassed，andthetreegrewasstrongasthestrongestman。 修改后 Therewasoncealittleboy，spalace。Hewasajollyfellowinhislife。 Oneday，hewentdowntothebrooktopicksomeflowers。Closetothebrookwasalittlelog，onitwasatinker。Besidehimwasatoolbox，andinitweresometools。Hemustbetheonethatfixedtheplumingmachineinmybackyard！mygrandpagaspedashesaidthat。Thetinkerwashavinghislunch：Oneortwopiecesofbread，abitofcoldmeat，andacoldpotato。Ithatgrandparanintothehouse，andgrabbedtwofreshapples，andgaveittothetinker。Thetinkerthankedgrandpaandatetheapples。Andthenhewentdowntothebrooktohaveadrink。Whenhecameback，hesaid，Nowmyboy，weshallplantatree！Atree？askedgrandpa，ButIthoughtonlygodmakestrees！True，saidthetinker，Onlygodmakestrees。Butsometimeswecouldhelphim。Andthetinkerpulledoutastick，anddugaholeinit。Inwhichhefoundabark。Hetookthebarkoutofthestick，andgavethesticktograndpa，saying，Hwashitinthebrook。Andsograndpawenttothebrook，andwashedupthestick。Andthenhewentbackwherethetinkerwasstandingwiththebarkinhishands。 Therehefoundthetinker，draggingsomegrassfromtheground。Ashand，andusedthegrasstotieuparoundwiththebark。Thenheslippedthebarkbackinthestick。Andthenhetookitout，squeezedthewaterout，andtoldgrandpatowashitupagain。Whenhecameback，heputthebarkbackinitagain。Andthenfitteditintoahole，thaveahole，afewmonthspassed，andthetreegrewasstrongasthestrongestman。 四年级：欧阳雨鹭
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