InternetABlessingoraCurse？互联网福

　　Internet：ABlessingoraCurse？互联网：福是祸？
　　Internet：ABlessingoraCurse？
　　Siftingthroughthehistoryofthe20thcentury，Imfascinatedbyatreasuretroveofbeneficialandinnovativebreakthroughsinscienceandtechnology。Inthepastcentury，numerouscreatireinventionshavebeenbroughttous，leadingtodesirabletransformationsandspeedinguptheevolutionofhumancivilization。Thepersetechnologicaldevelopmentsimprovetheproductivityandentitleustoamorefavorablelife。Andamongallthoseingeniousdesigns，theadventoftheInternet，Isuppose，hasthemostprofoundsignificancetousmankind。
　　SincetheverydatetheInternetcameintobeing，ithaschangedourlifeandworkdramatically。TheWorldWideWebrevealsamagicalandintriguingnewworldtoeveryonewovenupintothenet。Thevariouswebsitesprovideawealthofinformationanddataforthenetizens。Withtheirassistance，weneedntbothertoplungeintomultitudesofbooksinthelibrary，searchingforonlyoneortwoitems。Thepowerfulsearchengines，suchasGoogle，Yahoo，andSinafunctionashandytoolsforustofindallweneed，withjustafewclicks。Thevarietyofwebpagessupplyupdatednewsandinformativeknowledge，enablingustokeepabreastwiththetimes。TheBBS，shortfortheBulletinBoardServiceasahelpfulmediumforpeopletoexchangeavailableinformation。Tousstudentsoncampus，theBBSmeansconvenientconnectionwithallourpeersandeasyaccesstousefulmessages。Sointhissense，theInternethasgreatlyenrichedourlifeandpromotedmutualunderstandingbetweeninpiduals。Moreover，theInternetoffersusinstantcommunicationwithourfriendsandfamilynomatterhowfarwearefromeachother。Theemails，OICQ，ecards，netmeetingsandtheemergingSMSontheweballprovetobeofsufficienthelpwiththisfunction。Whatsmore，theinternetbeginstoplayavitallyimportantroleinbusinessandtrade。ThebrandnewecommercesuchasB2BandB2Cmakeitpossibleforthecorporationstodealwiththeiroperationseffectivelyandefficiently。AndtotheIPOs（InitialOperationOffering），thenetactsasanattractiveplatformfortheroadshow。
　　However，doestheInternetonlymeanblessingtothehumanbeings？Definitelynot。Thefactisthatplentyofnegativeinfluenceshavebeencausedbythenet。Thenotorioushackersattackthewebsitesofgovernmentandinstitutionsrampantly，damagingtheirsystemsandinterruptingtheoperations。Incyberspace，criminalseasilycommitcrimeandescape。Andthecomputervirusesspreadevenfasterthroughemails，causinglotsofcomputerfailures。
　　ThusitsapparentthattheInternetisablendofblessingandcurse。Butdespiteitsdisadvantagesandshortcomings，ImstillinstrongfavoroftheInternetandIdprefertoglorifyitsbeneficialoutcomes。Adventurousasitmayappeartobe，itsundoubtedlyoneofthemellowfruitsofhumanwisdom，right？
　　简评
　　本文的主题是网络的福与祸。作者列举了网络对生活和工作尤其是商务的巨大影响，并具体、形象地描述了种种便利，颇具说服力。另一方面，作者也客观地阐明网络存在的问题，诸如黑客、病毒和网络犯罪。在文章的最后作者得出结论：网络兼有利弊，但
　　其主流是造福人类。
　　本篇文章不似出自学生之手。因为作者对网络这一新生事物的把握可谓运筹帷幄。最能体现作者对主题的专业水准的是大量、准确地运用专业术语。文中出现了一系列的缩略语如WWW，BBS，OICQ，SMS，B2B，B2C，IPO’以及网络相关术语如netlzen，data，website，webpage，netmeeting，ecommerce，ecard，platform，cyberspace，hacker，virus’。这些无不显示出作者在此专题方面扎实的功底。
　　另外，文章的篇章结构和主题的推进可谓有法但无定法。本文显然采用了对比法。在证明网络的便捷时，作者把网络协助下的学习研究与传统的方式进行了鲜明的对比。一方面是网络上awealthOfinformation，withafewclicks’，另一方面是plungeintothelibraryforhours，searchingonlyoneOrtwoitems，拥有网络的轻松和传统方式的麻烦形成比照。
　　（点评教师：赵蓉）
　　Internet：ABlessingoraCurse？互联网：福是祸？