TherewasoncealittlegirlcalledLulu,whoisalsome,thatwantedtovisitthemoonforjustonetime。AndsoIpackedupeverythingthatIwillneed,andwenttothespaceporttogetready。 Beforewetookoff,IjustateasandwichanddreamedifIwereanastronaut。3,2,1andweblastedofftoouterspace。IwassoexcitedthatIeventooknoteswhenwewerestillontheship。IwrotethesewordswhichItheywere,Iloveflyingonthespaceshipandlearnaboutouterspace,althoughIamnotevenONTHEMOON,thosewordsIthoughtthatwouldmakemyfatherproud。 Nowsincewehadalreadyreachedthemoon,Igotdownandjumpedup,andfiguredthatIcouldjumpveryhigh。IknewwhybecauseIlearneditinscienceclasstoday,andsoIwrote,ONTHEMOON,IcanjumpveryhighbecausethatourweightislighterONTHEMOONaccordingtoitsgravity。Iloveexploring,andheardthattherewerealsoalienshere。 Iwasreallyexcited,andaskedsomeoftherealaliveastronautsifthealiensweretrue,Iwasconfused,Whydidsomesayyesandsomesayno?IthinkthatIaftersayingthosewordsIandtheastronautswentaroundandaroundthemoonlookingforaliens。AtfirstIthoughtthatwecouldfindsome,someoftheastronautssmiled。 ItknowwhytheysmiledbutIthoughtthatitwasprettynatural。AfteroneminuteIheardathumpingnoise,andaqueersoundcomingfromthedarkssideofthemoon。Ilookedoverthereandsawsomequeerlittlefellowsheadingtheirway,theyhadnowheretohide,andwenttohide。Whenthelittlequeermenwentawaywecameoutofourhidingspotandwenton。Ibegantowrite,IIthoughtitwasacoolreportandtheastronautssmiledagain。 Ididnotknowwhattheyweresmilingat,probablytheirhabitorsomethingperhaps?AfterthinkingaboutthatqueerquestionIheardanotherthumpingsoundandsomehugemenwalkedpassthemjustasthelittleonesdid。Iwasnowreallyconfused,Somelittleandsomebigones?perhapstheywerehavingagameorsomethinglikethat。 Afterthetour,Iwasveryexcitedtogivemyreporttomyfatherandsohoppedonthespaceshiptogobacktoearth。Btfindwheretheylived。Ttsayaword。IwasnowextraconfusedbecauseIthoughtthattheywerenervoustoo。AndsotheytookanotherpassagetoAfricawhereitistheplacebesttohaveasafari,whichistohaveapicnicwithwildanimalsaroundthem。 AfterlandingIsaid,Whydidyoutakethispass?andthenafterthattheysmiledagain,Iwasstillconfused。WhenIturnedmyheadinfrontofmyself,Isawdadonthegroundwithwildanimalsallaroundhim。NowIIwassosurprised,andeventhealienscame。NowIknowthewholeplanaboutthis。 修改后: TherewasoncealittlegirlcalledLulu,whowasme,wantedtovisitthemoonforjustonetime。SoIpackedupeverythingthatIneeded,andwenttothespaceporttogetready。 Beforewetookoff,IjustateasandwichanddreamedIhadbeenanastronaut。3,2,1andweblastedofftoouterspace。IwassoexcitedthatIeventooknoteswhenwewerestillontheship。IwrotethesewordswhichItheywere,Iloveflyingonthespaceshipandlearnaboutouterspace,althoughIamnotevenONTHEMOON,Ithoughtthosewordswouldmakemyfatherproud。 Whenwereachedthemoon,Igotdownandjumpedup,andfiguredthatIcouldjumpveryhigh。IknewwhybecauseIlearneditinscienceclass。SoIwrote,ONTHEMOON,IcanjumpveryhighbecauseourweightislighterONTHEMOONaccordingtoitsgravity。Ilovedexploring,andheardthattherewerealsoaliensthere。 Iwasreallyexcited,andaskedsomeoftherealaliveastronautsifthealiensweretrue,someofthemsaidyesbutsomeofthemsaidno,soIwasconfused。Whydidsomesayyesandsomesayno?IthoughtthatIshouldhavetofinditout。ThentheastronautsandIwentaroundandaroundthemoonlookingforaliens。AtfirstIthoughtthatwecouldfindsome,butanhourlater,texistatall。Someoftheastronautssmiled。 ItknowwhytheysmiledbutIthoughtthatitwasprettynatural。Oneminutelater,Iheardathumpingnoise,andaqueersoundcomingfromthedarkssideofthemoon。Ilookedoverthereandsawsomequeerlittlefellowsheadingtheirway。Theyhadnowheretohide,sotheyfoundapileofrockwhichwasbyourside。Whenthelittlequeermenwentaway,wecameoutofourhidingspotandwenton。Ibegantowrite,IIthoughtitwasacoolreportandtheastronautssmiledagain。 Ididnotknowwhattheyweresmilingat,perhapstheirhabitorsomethingelse?Afterthinkingaboutthatqueerquestion,Iheardanotherthumpingsoundandsomehugemenwalkedpassthemjustasthelittleonesdid。Iwasnowreallyconfused,Somelittleandsomebigones?Perhapstheywerehavingagameorsomethinglikethat。 Afterthetour,Iwasveryexcitedtogivemyreporttomyfatherandhoppedonthespaceshiptogobacktoearth。Btfindwheretheylived。Ttsayaword。IwasnowextraconfusedbecauseIthoughttheywerenervoustoo。AndsotheytookanotherpassagetoAfricawhereitisthebestplacetohaveasafari,whichistohaveapicnicwithwildanimalsaroundthem。 AfterlandingIsaid,Whydidyoutakethispass?andthentheysmiledagain,Iwasstillconfused。WhenIturnedmyheadinfrontofmyself,Isawdadonthegroundwithwildanimalsallaroundhim。NowIrememberedthatitwasmybirthday。Iwassosurprised,andeventhealienscame。Suddenly,Irealizedthewholeplan。 四年级:欧阳雨鹭