极端主义造成的社会

　　DeathofExtremismResultsfromDeathofSocialCare
　　Tomoveornottomove，adilemmathathadbeenplaguingWengBiaofortwomonthswasfinallyresolvedinaburningway。Withhistworoomshackknockeddownbythegovernmentsbulldozer，Wengmadeadesperateattemptofpouringacanofgasolineonhimselfandsparkingafire。Hewasdead，whichraisedthetensionbetweenthegovernmentandtheinhabitantstomovegreaterthanever。Sowhoistoblame？Nospecificculpritbutthesocietyitself。Itistheillsocialresponsetothoseinneedthatledtothebehaviorofextremismandtheensuingun
　　Wengsstorytypifiesthebuddyshipbetweensocialinstabilityandextremebehavior。Thebulldozernotonlypulleddownthefamilysshelterbuttheirlasthopeofgettingthejusticedoneaswell。Withouthome，withoutfear。Itistheboldnessfromdespairthatignitedthewantonbreachofsocialrule，whichbasicallycomesintheformofextremebehaviorlikeselfburning。Turmoil，thestateofrulelessness，thusstarted。
　　Butwheresthesociety？Hasiteverdonesomethingtostopthetragedy？No！Allwecanseeissilencetilltheburningday。Andtheworseisyettocome。InthecaseofZhangXinpin，adepressedboywhojumpedoutofthebuildingtodeathbecauseofwowingfromthespectators。Societysimplyfacilitatesthesadendbyinducingthevictimtotheextreme。
　　Throwthecardsofneglectandinstigationintothetrashbox，andwegetthetrump。Thatisthecareforothers。IfWengBiaohadbeengivenachancetopourhisworrytosomebodyand
　　thatpersonofferedtolendahand，thefirecouldprobablyhavebeenavoidedeventhoughthedemolitionwenton。Why？Becauseasenseofbeingcaredaboutisgained。Weng，formerlyfoughtbyhimself，nowfoundsomethingtorelyon。Similarly，ifthesocietyapproachestheextremisttobe，listenstohissufferinganddoessomesupportivethings（comfortingwords，donation。。，anythingwilldo），thehorribledecision，onceasstiffasapoker，willmostlybegivenup。
　　Yet，theproblemisnotover。Whatiftheextremebehaviorreallyhappens？Whichroleshouldthesocietyplay？
　　First，thedignityofthevictimhimselfdeservesfullrespect。Blamingthevictimforhisstupidityonlyirritatesthekindofpeoplesharingthesamesuffering。
　　Second，thecauseoftheeventshouldbepublicizedifithasanythingtodowithmostpeoplesinterest。Otherwise，Rumorswillerodepeoplestrustinthesocietywhileturmoilcanwellbestirredupbythewidespreadanxiety。
　　Last，theproblemthatbringsaboutthetragedyissupposedtogetasolution。Itcanbetheestablishmentandmodificationoflaws，orsimplymoreattentiontothegroupofpeopleinneed。
　　Itcountshowwedotocurbtheextremebehaviorforthesakeofsocialstability。Thebestpolicy，asIsaidbefore，istocareforthepeopleintrouble，maketheeventknowntothepublicifnecessaryandhealthedefecthiddenbehind。
　　简评
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