IntheTVstationofParis,alittleboyandhismotherwentinforvery,very,veryextremelyimportantnews,becauseoneoftheirpreciousroofshadbeenstolenfromsomebanditsthatspeakSpanish。THENEWSREPORTERssaidthatthiscouldbeverynewsworthy,andtheyshouldbeonittoo。 Whentheyweredone,theycheckedittoo,AanditwasSpanishbandits,smostpreciousroofs。Whocouldthesebanditsbe?Andnowwehavetheowneroftheroof。〔Gsmother〕。Thebanditswereasstrangeasanyis,andtheyevenhavestrangeeyeslikewhatFrancepeoplehave。Dtyouthinkthattheywerejusttheweirdestbanditsever,andIIitwassostrangeandunbelievable。 Iohwaitasecond,ourworldandSiftheystoleourroof,welltheymuststoleitforsomeparticularreason,andIandsotogetridofus。Oh,andIthinkIhearanarmycomingtowardsus,andIthinkthatwearedoomed。 WsnewsandIhopethatyouhaveenjoyedit,andclearosayItenjoy,butAhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!HelpusthinkofaclearplantodefeattheSpanisharmy!Ah! THENEWSREPORTERthewomansaid,DtentertheAmericagate,Ihaveaplan。ThenshegrabbedoneofthebravestsoldiersandplacedhiminfrontofthegatewitwhichwastheAmericagate,hesaid,Welcometoourland,andIandwehavecometogiveyouallofourjewels,ifyouleaveusinpiece。WellIguessthatwecouldobeyit,theythentookthefakepaperjewelsthatwaspartoftheplan,andlefttherealjewelsofAmericainthecastleasleep。 修改后 span IntheTVstationofParis,alittleboyandhismotherwentinforvery,very,veryextremelyimportantnews,becauseoneoftheirpreciousroofshadbeenstolenfromsomebanditsthatspeakSpanish。THENEWSREPORTERssaidthatthiscouldbeverynewsworthy,andtheyshouldbeonittoo。 Whentheyweredone,theycheckedittoo,AanditwasSpanishbandits,smostpreciousroofs。Whocouldthesebanditsbe?Andnowwehavetheowneroftheroof。〔Gsmother〕。Thebanditswereasstrangeasanyare,andtheyevenhavestrangeeyeslikewhatFrenchpeoplehave。Dtyouthinkthattheywerejusttheweirdestbanditsever,andIIitwassostrangeandunbelievable。 Iohwaitasecond,ourworldandSiftheystoleourroof,welltheymuststoleitforsomeparticularreason,andIandsotogetridofus。Oh,andIthinkIhearanarmycomingtowardsus,andIthinkthatwearedoomed。 WsnewsandIhopethatyouhaveenjoyedit,andclearosayItenjoy,butAhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!HelpusthinkofaclearplantodefeattheSpanisharmy!Ah! THENEWSREPORTERthewomansaid,DtentertheAmericagate,Ihaveaplan。ThenshegrabbedoneofthebravestsoldiersandplacedhiminfrontoftheAmericagate,hesaid,Welcometoourland,andIandwehavecometogiveyouallofourjewels,ifyouleaveusinpeace。WellIguessthatwecouldobeyit,theythentookthefakepaperjewelsthatwaspartoftheplan,andlefttherealjewelsofAmericainthecastleasleep。 四年级:欧阳雨鹭