OnthetopofthemountainhilltherelivedalittleboycalledMarlin。Hewasajollyfellowthathelpedpeoplewhentheywereinneed。 Theonlyproblemwas,whenevertherewassomebodyinneed,hewouldgivethemsomethingtoeatandtosolvetheirproblem。Thepeopleinhiscountrysoonbecamesickofthis,andsowantedhimtostop。ButMt;nobodyknewwhenhewasgoingtostop,twanthimtobotherallday。Ugh,butMalldaylonghehelpedthisandthat,twanttomordacityhim,andsosaidthathewasverykind。 Oneday,Marlinsawaboycrying,andsaid,Htcry,I,thesuperMarlinishere!AndIamgoingtosolveyourproblem!Iwantamusicbox,atthesewords,Marlinwasastonished,Aamusicbbox?Yes,repliedtheboyjumpinghappily,Btbuymeone。ItisattheshopnearSunshineschool。Ihopetogetmeone!Wahoo!Marlinsaid,Itaffordamusicbox!Itisworth100! Marlinwasverysad,butalsowantedtotry,forhewasthekingofeverything,andhelpssavetheday。Herantohishouse,andcountedhismoney,butfoundoutthatheonlyhad10。Hewasnowvery,veryangry。Hehaddecidedtoearnmoreandmoremoney,andsotohelpthatpoorlittleboy。Ashehadpromised,heworkedveryhardtoearnmoney。Althoughhewasjutsalittleboy,forthosearetherules。Andwhenhehadenoughmoney,hewouldbuyTHEMUSICBOX,andhandittothatpoorboy。 Marlindidanythinghecouldtoearnmoney:Sweepthefloor,growplants,waterthem,andcutflowersforthehouse。Whenhehadalready90,hehaddecidedtohelpotherpeople。Whenitwasalreadywinter,hetookashovelandhelpedhisneighbors,andtheypaidhimagreatdealofmoney。 Atlast,Mhewassoexcitedthathehoppedhereandtheretentimes!Finally,hewenttothestorenearSunshineschool,andboughtTHEMUSICBOX,andthenhandedittothesameboyathishome。Marlinsoonbecamefamous,andhewascalled,MarlinBlavatsky。 修改后 span OnthetopofthemountainhilllivedalittleboycalledMarlin。Hewasajollyfellowthathelpedpeoplewhentheywereinneed。 Theonlyproblemwas,whenevertherewassomebodyinneed,hewouldgivethemsomethingtoeatsoastosolvetheirproblems。Thepeopleinhiscountrysoonbecamesickofthis,andsowantedhimtostop。ButMt;nobodyknewwhenhewasgoingtostop,twanthimtobotherallday。Ugh,butMalldaylonghehelpedthisandthat,twanttomordacityhim,andtheysaidthathewasverykind。 Oneday,Marlinsawaboycrying,andsaid,Htcry,I,thesuperMarlinishere!AndIamgoingtosolveyourproblem!Iwantamusicbox,atthesewords,Marlinwasastonished,Aamusicbbox?Yes,repliedtheboyjumpinghappily,Btbuymeone。ItisattheshopnearSunshineschool。Ihopetogetmeone!Wahoo!Marlinsaid,Itaffordamusicbox!Itisworth100! Marlinwasverysad,butalsowantedtotry,forhewasthekingofeverything,andhelpssavetheday。Herantohishouse,andcountedhismoney,butfoundoutthatheonlyhad10。Hewasnowvery,veryangry。Hehaddecidedtoearnmoreandmoremoney,andsotohelpthatpoorlittleboy。Ashehadpromised,heworkedveryhardtoearnmoney。Althoughhewasjustalittleboy,forthosearetherules。Andwhenhehadenoughmoney,hewouldbuyTHEMUSICBOX,andhandittothatpoorboy。 Marlindidanythinghecouldtoearnmoney:Sweepthefloor,growplants,waterthem,andcutflowersforthehouse。Whenhehadalready90,hehaddecidedtohelpotherpeople。Whenitwasalreadywinter,hetookashovelandhelpedhisneighbors,andtheypaidhimagreatdealofmoney。 Atlast,Mhewassoexcitedthathehoppedhereandtheretentimes!Finally,hewenttothestorenearSunshineschool,andboughtTHEMUSICBOX,andthenhandedittothesameboyathishome。Marlinsoonbecamefamous,andhewascalled,MarlinBlavatsky。 四年级:欧阳雨鹭